2/4/11

Lost Angel chapter 10

Ellen became sick and her temp. was very high.After 2 days she passed the disease to Gertie and became sick too so Hilda had to take care of both of them.she was also taking care of the animals.Hilda was exhausted,when Ellen and Gertie became better Hilda was totally sick but fortunately Mrs.Brandon,a villager, came to see if Hilda was fine since she did not go to the village for a long time.she found Hilda so tired and she fainted so Mrs.Brandon took her to the hospital .After recovering,Gertie and Ellen went to visit Hilda and Gertie was thankful for the villagers fot taking care of Hilda but ib the same time she did not want any intrusion in her life!!!!!
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  1. nadiaFebruary 4, 2011 at 3:45 PM

    Hanady that is great but why do you write each chapter on its own
    now I have to pass on each one and comment
    you are really tiring.....I'm just kidding
    I will just comment by writing refer to the comment on chapter 10 what about that

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  2. Chereen MarashdeFebruary 4, 2011 at 4:13 PM

    I agree with Nadia :P but I'll just comment on the last post (:
    I noticed how much you dislike Gertie, as you refer to her as stupid :P haha anyway
    so what are your thoughts so far about the story?
    And what do you think wil happen next?

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  3. Shabana NadeemFebruary 4, 2011 at 7:37 PM

    Hanadi, I am with Chereen and Nadia.Was it not tedious posting on each chapter?Take a shortcut next time..:]

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